In Star Trek: Strange New Worlds, Number One testifies in court as a prosecutor questions her.

Unsurprisingly, many writers in the Mythcreants community want to write stories that promote social justice. But just because we have good intentions doesn’t mean we’re doing no harm. Social justice issues are often sensitive, and many writers don’t know how to approach them. Unfortunately, this often results in a story that’s problematic instead of constructive, which is the last thing we want!

Building on our previous list of social justice blunders, let’s look at the five issues we frequently see when editing manuscripts with social justice messages.

1. Representation Is Missing

The teenage mutants Rogue and Iceman sit next to each other in a living room, looking pensive.

In stories, representation separates those who simply say they support social justice from those who truly stand up for it. A storyteller who speaks in favor of social justice but does not include diverse characters looks like a hypocrite. More than that, a story about marginalization that unfolds without the actual people who are marginalized looks exploitative, appropriative, or condescending.

Take the 2000 X-Men movie. In it, characters Rogue and Iceman visit Iceman’s parents. There, Iceman comes out to his parents about being a mutant. His mother responds by asking if he’s tried not being a mutant. This scene is obviously based on the experiences of queer people. There’s just one problem: There are no queer characters in the movie!*

Regardless of whether the filmmakers thought they were supporting queer people by doing this, they only showed cowardice in exploiting a real world issue. If they were truly advocating for equal rights, they’d be willing to create controversy by supporting queer people in unambiguous ways. Instead, they appropriated the trauma of marginalized people to make their privileged protagonists look sympathetic.

Unfortunately, not much has changed in the 23 years since. The show Star Trek: Strange New Worlds has a storyline about the oppression of Illyrians. While they preach about bigotry in the episode Ad Astra per Aspera, it’s hard to ignore that the show is a step backward for equality. Star Trek: Discovery is led by a Black woman and features gay, trans, and nonbinary characters. Strange New Worlds is helmed by yet another white man, has far fewer queer characters, features a prominent ableist storyline, and kills off its only disabled character in season one.

For fiction writers, depicting people who are different from us can be intimidating. Yes, we might get it wrong. But because marginalized people love representation, they’re also pretty forgiving. Simply being aware that you should do research, stay away from topics that are sensitive, and hire consultants when you can afford it is half the battle. At the end of the day, it’s no more difficult than the other storytelling skills you have to master to write a good story.

If you can’t gather the courage and muster the effort to represent others in your story, what are you doing adding social justice messages? Social justice isn’t about saying the right thing; it’s about elevating marginalized people and their experiences. In stories, that means including marginalized characters.

2. The Bar Is Too Low

A super strong woman faces off in a boxing ring against an alien man.

Social justice is a moving target. That’s mostly a good thing, because the biggest cause of changing standards is forward progress! However, this means that a good social justice message is one that’s needed today, not one that was needed a hundred years ago. To demonstrate, imagine you encountered a story with one of these messages:

  • Women are just as intelligent as men.
  • Black people should be allowed in white bathrooms.
  • Not all Jews are wealthy bankers.

Those don’t look like progressive messages, just the opposite. By opening arguments that are already settled, these messages normalize extreme bigotry. They suggest that ideas such as “women as less intelligent” are plausible enough to be worth debunking in the first place.

While those examples are extreme, unfortunately this is a common issue. That’s partly because we love to emulate our favorite stories, even stories that are very old. Consider the hit show Stranger Things, which frequently borrows from influential ’80s movies. It got in hot water by regurgitating the sexist tropes of yesteryear, such as having two female characters get in a jealous turf war.

Other times, storytellers have this issue because they aren’t in tune with the social justice issue they are covering. Take The Orville. In the bizarre episode About a Girl, the crew works to protect a girl from an alien species that has eliminated women from society. To do so, the protagonists argue in court that women are just as worthwhile as men. No, I’m not making that up.

Besides taking feminism back a couple hundred years, this episode is also anti-queer. Gender and biological sex are consistently conflated, and the only queer characters on the show come from this misogynist alien species. This society also eliminates its few women by surgically altering their bodies and reassigning their gender without consent. In today’s context, it looks like propaganda designed to demonize gender-affirming medical care.

How do you know if your message is too old? If you are highlighting a problem of injustice, it should be either unknown or not widely agreed to exist. If it’s unknown, it’s constructive to raise awareness. For instance, the way the US treats its prisoners or farmworkers has been swept under the rug for a long time. Whereas if the problem is not widely agreed upon, that means the issue is controversial. Bias in policing and trans rights fall in that category.

If your problem is widely known and agreed to be a problem, covering it probably does more harm than good. That’s because it lowers our standards by normalizing injustice. Featuring unjust societies also makes it more difficult to give marginalized characters positions of influence so they can impact the plot and feature prominently in the story. It reduces representation.

Of course, that doesn’t mean we should never revisit old issues. If you are writing a historical novel about women suffragists, naturally you’ll be covering how women gained the right to vote. In that case, you can take it for granted that your audience supports voting rights for women and focus on a social justice issue in need of more coverage. Did you know white suffragists embraced racist rhetoric in support of voting rights? That’s definitely ripe for a message about hypocrisy, intersectionality, and unity.

3. Oppression Is Exaggerated

Intricate patterns that form a circle on the cover of City of Brass.

As storytellers, it’s our job to bring compelling threats into the story. However, in some cases, this can end up working against us. In our effort to make protagonists sympathetic, create problems, or simply communicate clearly to our audience, we can exaggerate issues too much. This can feel forced and break believability at the best of times, but it’s especially damaging when covering oppression.

Similar to a message from 50 years ago, exaggerated depictions of oppression normalize extreme behavior. Not only that, but they give the audience the wrong idea about what oppression looks like and what effect it has.

If every story about oppression features lynch mobs, everyday racist rhetoric begins to look innocent in comparison. But everyday racism is harmful largely because it happens every day. The cumulative harm of low-level aggression is difficult to convey in a story; you have to live it to fully understand.

Making our depictions extreme indicates a lack of sensitivity to the issue. Take the novel City of Brass, which features a djinn city with a half-djinn underclass called the shafit. The oppression against the shafit is so extreme that it is outright illegal to give them medical care of any kind, something I have never heard of in the real world.

Despite this huge problem in the city, the oppression of the shafit isn’t the central focus of the book. The main character doesn’t seem to care about their suffering at all. While this seems discordant, both this lack of caring and the extreme oppression are signs that the storyteller is not educated on these issues or particularly passionate about them. The result is another depiction of oppression that’s exploitative.

Extreme oppression also displays insecurity on the storyteller’s part. In many cases, the storyteller is afraid that if they don’t depict extreme bigotry, the audience won’t get it. But it’s our job to make them get it, and if we don’t think we’re up to the task, we shouldn’t be covering these issues.

A skilled storyteller makes less mean more. Instead of making the depiction extreme, we can illustrate the harmful effect of things that are closer to home. For instance, imagine your character has to be at an interview in five minutes, but they have to go to the bathroom. They don’t feel safe using the bathroom that’s close by, so they race up and down three flights of stairs just to pee. Then they arrive at their interview several minutes late and sweating. Over time, they start going out less and less because finding a bathroom is such a hassle.

Choose the lightest amount of oppression you can get away with and use your story to show how it matters. If it hinders the protagonist, it will have an impact. If we all use severe depictions instead, it feeds the myth that bigotry is somehow over. It excuses people engaging in bigoted behavior because audiences come to think anything less than genocide must be okay.

4. Bigotry Isn’t Clearly Condemned

Kamala Khan sits in front of the desk of her school counselor, pretending to pay attention.

In the corner across from extreme depictions are ones that rely on the audience to know more than they do. Since we know what we’re trying to do, it’s easy to underestimate how explicit we need to be. But audiences that have little lived experience or education about these issues may not recognize bigotry when they see it. This is especially likely when we’re covering the right issues.

Because these are cases where storytellers fail to communicate their intent, it’s difficult to find firm examples from popular works. Distinguishing these instances from plain old bigotry requires a creator interview with just the right details. One well-known example is the show Mad Men. The writers meant to portray the destructiveness of misogynist white men like Don Draper in the show. But they also gave their historical setting an incredibly glamorous look. As a result, many viewers admired Don Draper instead of hating him.

Another likely example is the depiction of anti-ADHD sentiment in Ms. Marvel. The main character, Kamala Khan, is a Muslim Pakistani American that has to deal with racism and religious intolerance. She’s also strongly coded as having ADHD. Given that the head writer shares this neurotype, this is probably not an accident. However, this means that not only is the depiction of ADHD not explicit, but the worst ableism also isn’t condemned.

In the first episode, Kamala deals with a school counselor who belittles her for doodling in class. This is an adaptive behavior people with ADHD often use to pay attention. He also scolds Kamala when her attention wanders instead of giving her a fidget toy to help her focus.

On the plus side, this aggression is realistic and would benefit from better awareness. Because the main character is on the receiving end of bigotry, the viewers are primed to see the counselor’s behavior as a problem. However, specifically because this issue has low awareness, most viewers probably won’t recognize that the school counselor is ableist. The show needed to communicate this, and it doesn’t.

If you have a depiction with any kind of toxic social dynamics that are subtle, you can clarify what’s happening by:

  • Giving it a name, such as ableism, racism, abuse, etc.
  • Making a credible character, such as a protagonist or mentor, speak out against it.
  • Showing the protagonist learn to stand up and push back against it.

Then be careful about how cool you make bigoted antagonists appear. While villains usually benefit from being cool, people will admire these villains, and that’s not what you want.

5. Forgiveness Is Prioritized

In Star Wars: Rebels, Zeb grins as he wrests his hand on Kallus's shoulder.

These days, many storytellers avoid black-and-white moral scenarios. Completely evil villains can come off as fake, and many storytellers are looking for more constructive, feel-good solutions than simply slaughtering the enemy. Instead, many villains end up seeing the error of their ways, are forgiven for their crimes, and end up joining Team Good.

However, oppression is inherently a black-and-white issue. The oppressors have the most power, and they are using that power to harm the vulnerable. In contrast, marginalized people do not have the power to hurt their oppressors in significant ways. When a marginalized group manages to land a few blows, they can expect retaliation at a larger and more violent level. Any hatred or anger marginalized people feel toward oppressors is not only harmless but largely justified.

In a context like this, forgiveness is easily twisted into another tool of oppression. Forgiveness is supposed to represent how we feel about those who have harmed us. It’s meant to be freely given once we feel it has been earned. However, privileged people not only equate forgiveness with getting a pardon for crimes committed, but they often feel entitled to it. In short, oppressors pressure people to forgive them as a means of avoiding accountability. With accountability removed, oppressors are free to continue harming others.

When storytellers try to mix forgiveness with oppression, it can go terribly wrong. Take the show Star Wars: Rebels. In it, protagonist Zeb is the survivor of a genocide committed by the Empire. An early villain of the show, Agent Kallus, participated in this genocide. He even uses the signature weapon of Zeb’s people: a trophy from the genocide. However, Kallus continually fails to catch the heroes, quickly losing his aura of menace. Since he was no longer an effective antagonist, the writers naturally looked for something else to do with his character.

Unfortunately, they decided to use the old “stuck in an elevator” relationship arc to redeem him. This meant stranding Zeb and Kallus on a planet together, so Zeb can learn to get along with the guy who participated in the genocide of his people! To the writers’ credit, they did decide to retcon Kallus’s role in the genocide before the episode, so he was no longer a direct participant. Even so, Kallus was part of the empire that did it, and he still had his trophy weapon. Putting Zeb and Kallus in a situation where they had to band together to survive was gross.

This doesn’t mean forgiveness can never appear in stories about social justice. However, it must be done carefully to avoid pitfalls. Generally, an inappropriate emphasis on forgiveness comes in one of three forms:

  • A marginalized character forgives someone they would not realistically forgive because the harm done was too great. This treatment downplays or erases the harm that was done.
  • A marginalized character is pressured into forgiving someone that harmed them. This pressure might come from other protagonists to try to convince them to forgive, or, as in the case of Rebels, it could come from a plot that requires them to forgive to save the day.
  • The anger of marginalized characters for crimes done to them is demonized or vilified. The story emphasizes how violent and dangerous oppressed people are because they are angry.

Instead of using these patterns, separate the redemption of oppressors from forgiveness by those they harmed. An oppressor who feels remorse should work on their own to make up for their crimes without expecting anything from those they harmed. If they do that, then afterward someone might forgive them – if the harm was mild enough. If it’s not mild, the harmed party can choose not to forgive the former oppressor but to accept their help anyway.


All of these errors have something in common. They stem from the writer’s decision to address bigotry by adding it to their story. Even when we add bigoted characters just to smack them around, we are still letting them define our worlds and characters. We are repeating and reinforcing the same unfair social structures. Before you make that choice, consider your other option: leaving it all behind. Show everyone the world you want to live in.

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