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392 pages, Hardcover
First published May 16, 2017
“Never forget, Sanada Takeo: in this forest, there is no place to hide.”
"A word of warning..." He bent closer. The scent of warm stone and wood smoke emanated form his skin.
Mariko blinked.
"Don't bare your neck to a wolf."
Inako.
A city of a hundred arched bridges and a thousand cherry trees. A city of mud and sweat and sewage. A city of golden cranes and amber sunsets.
A city of secrets.
Mariko glimpsed something on the ground. It glinted in the mud, the colour of burnt sugar.
She stopped on her tracks and leaned down a little, then some more. Closer.
She had to catch her breath; she picked the object up. So light.
So soft. She had found-
A leaf.
I've found a leaf.
“And a part of her couldn’t help but think—were he another boy, in another time, in another place—Mariko would have liked to hear Ōkami’s laughter.
Would have enjoyed being the cause of it.
But he was a member of the Black Clan. The band of mercenaries who had tried to kill her. Who had slaughtered Chiyo and Nobutada.
She hated this boy and all he stood for.”
"The only power any man has over you is the power you give him."
"A blossom can split through a rock, given enough time."
Overall, I'm not impressed and just want my time back that was spent reading this trash.
“In the beginning, there were two suns and two moons.”
“Rise from the ashes. And take your righteous place.”
“Be as swift as the wind. As silent as the forest. As fierce as the fire. As unshakable as the mountain. And you can do anything.”
“The entire time she'd watched him - waited for him to join her, even in death - her features had remained serene. A flame in the mist.”
"Be as swift as the wind. As silent as the forest. As fierce as the fire. As unshakable as the mountain."
R.I.P Emi
June 1998-May 2017.
She died doing what she loves. Crying over fictional characters.
“I will not be bandied about by men any longer. I am not a prize to be bought or sold.”
All her life, Mariko wanted to be something, more than just a noble's daughter. Life as a girl wasn't satisfying, especially now that she's betrothed to the emperor's son.
On her way to the capital, she escapes an ambush leaving her the only survivor. Therefore, she tries to infiltrate the Black Clan, her assassins, to discover their motives, she can't go back or she'll be a shame to her family. Dressed as a boy, she succeeds and meets Takeda Ranmaru, and his second-in-command, his best friend Okami. Soon, she discovers that the truth is way more complicated and starts questioning what she knew all her life.
Meanwhile, her twin Kenshin will do anything to retrieve his sister.
I enjoyed reading Flame in the Mist a lot. It was one of my most anticipated books in 2017. I wasn't a big of the Wrath and the Dawn but come on, this is set in Japan. And here's the thing, I'm obsessed about Japan, especially the Edo period. So this is a Mulan retelling (one of my favorite Disney movies), set in the old Japan times, and with a promising summary, what's there not love?
It doesn't stop there. While reading this book, there are so many Japanese elements I liked:
✓ Samurais. I love Samurais (watched many anime about them) and oh, the heroine's brother is a Samurai named Kenshin. Seriously, that's so awesome.
✓ Geishassssssssss.
✓ Japanese words. So I didn't know about the glossary until I was done (it wasn't in my copy anyway), so make sure to not forget it. At first, it was cool when I recognized many words. It stopped being cool when they became too many. But hey, we always have google.
✓ A demonic forest (with yokai, even if it's a myth, because what if it wasn't?).
“Our greatest enemy can often be found within.”
However, when I look more closely, I realize that no matter how much appreciate these things, it's not enough. There were many things I didn't like. At all. You'll notice btw a great amount of which reminds me in this review.
► Mariko.
✔ She didn't annoy me (believe me, it's something). She was likable and I liked how she always wanted to be someone more than her society allowed her to.
✘ She sounds so badass and smartass. That's it. Sounds. We are told all the time how smart she is but like everyone already said, show instead of telling. Eventually, we get tired of hearing what a genius she is while taking illogical decisions. So she's making these super cool weapons... to the people who tried to kill her. She claims to make them trust her. But if she's so intelligent, she'll notice that she's helping more than hurting. . Don't get me wrong, I liked her but I just wanted cleverer actions on her part. Later, she starts repeating herself. We hear the same ideas all time. No, I shouldn't do that or I'll be a traitor and dozens of other similar words. It gets tiring. I also didn't understand if she can't go back because it'll be a shame, then why stay longer in the forest and try to discover your murders intentions? If she goes back, it'll be a bigger shame, right?
► The love relationship:
✔ It was so cute. I don't mind hate to love relationships no matter how cliche they are. I also liked the love interest, no, not saying his name! The tension build up was so sexy that'll make you root for them. I hoped we had even less romance, though.
✘ It's so similar to the wrath and the dawn. The whole book is, for that matter. Sure, another setting but the events and characters are at the core the same. I should mention that I liked this more than the Wrath and the Dawn (wasn't a fan of Shazi in the first book). So I'm pretty sure the fans of her other duology will love this one. Now this one is a huge spoiler concerning the romance and the end so if you're planning on reading this book, please don't read it.
► The writing:
✔ It's pretty, and easy to follow. Renee painted the picture in my mind leaving a space for my own imagination.
✘ It became too much sometimes, too many descriptions for obvious things. Even though I like the concept, we hear about the Furinkazan more than necessary (it doesn't make the book more Asian if it was repeated all the time, you know. Which is NOT even Jap).
► Her past life.
✘ So she has a brother, a twin. We barely know anything about Mariko and Kenshin's relationship. How he treats, for example. Yeah, sure he was always protective and stuff. But is adding few memories too much? I'd liked to know more about her relationship with her family members. She only tells us that she's mistreated because a girl but never how. I was disappointed when then this topic was poorly handled. I also didn't like him much.
► The secondary characters.
✔ One of the best things about this book! I liked to know more about them! Yoshi, Ren, Yumi, and everyone. It was nice to see her spending time with other people who had their own personalities, not just fillers. I also liked Kenshin and Amaya's relationship but wished more depth in his character.
✘ So we have a name, Okami. Aka Wolf. Ironically, I read Scarlet this week and the literal meaning of the word annoyed me then. Still annoying here.
► The feminist aspect
✔ I liked how even in those hard times, she was trying to prove herself and value as a woman.
“I’ve never been angry to have been born a woman. There have been times I’ve been angry at how the world treats us, but I see being a woman as a challenge I must fight. Like being born under a stormy sky. Some people are lucky enough to be born on a bright summer’s day. Maybe we were born under clouds. No wind. No rain. Just a mountain of clouds we must climb each morning so that we may see the sun.”
Briefly, if you enjoyed TWATD, then I'm sure you'll like this one. If you didn't, well, I don't recommend it. It doesn't end with a cliffhanger, not a major one at least. I will be reading the sequel of course, even though this book had many problems, it's still set in Japan. It was also so fun. And oh, I don't think it's a Mulan retelling, only dressing up as a boy is a common thing.
This book was far from being perfect and it could've been better but I liked it.
"If I am marching to my death, then I
will march to it as a girl. Without fear."
"There is such strength in being a woman. But it is a strength
you must choose for yourself. No one can choose it for you.
We can bend the wind to our ear if we would only try."
Fear kept her alert. She would always let it feed her. Never
let it consume her.
"My heart knows
your heart. A heart doesn't care about good or bad, right or
wrong. A heart is always true."
"I believe
the stars align so that souls can find one another. Whether they
are meant to be souls in love or souls in life remains to be seen."
"It was a mistake. All of it. For as long as she'd known him, Mariko had despised the very idea of this boy.
But the truth of him?
The truth was not quite as simple. It was silent entreaty. A wordless plea."
"Mariko had never thought she'd see so many naked feelings cross his finely chiseled face."
*I received a copy of this book from the publisher in exchange for an honest review*“I’ve never been angry to have been born a woman. There have been times I’ve been angry at how the world treats us, but I see being a woman as a challenge I must fight. Like being born under a stormy sky. Some people are lucky enough to be born on a bright summer’s day. Maybe we were born under clouds. No wind. No rain. Just a mountain of clouds we must climb each morning so that we may see the sun.”
I was hesitant to read Flame in the Mist after a total miss-miss The Wrath & the Dawn was for me, so take to consideration that if you read and enjoyed the aforementioned TWATD, there's a very big chance you'll enjoy FITM as much or maybe even more.
This book follows a story of seventeen years old Mariko, whose life is suffocating her with rules and confines of being a proper lady, meant for only one purpose: to be a prize sold into a political marriage that will benefit her father. So when on her way to her future husbands, Mariko is almost killed and is presumed dead for the rest of the world, she seizes the opportunity to finally become her own person and follows her dreams. Many of you already know, this book is a loose retelling of Mulan, featuring a strong-minded heroine and her adventures in feudal Japan. Japanese culture is, alas, a rare guest in YA literature these days, and one of the reasons I was willing to give Renee Ahdieh another chance was this unique setting, and, plus, you know, who can say no to Mulan, right? I must say, to the extent of my knowledge, which is really not big, and judging by the feelings I had during the reading process, I absolutely loved the setting in this book. It really felt like I was reading a book about Japanese culture and had this ghostly feeling of being present in a world of samurais and ronins; I felt bushido – the way of the warrior - the heroine and other characters were following.
Side note: I would recommend to look into the glossary at the end of the book before you start reading. There's a lot of Japanese terms in the book that will make it easier if you acknowledge yourself with them beforehand.
The first 30% or so of the book were perfect for me: I liked everything about it; I admired and almost loved Mariko as our main character: her resolve to act, to rise above her stand, which was a hard task for a woman at the time, was admirable. And Mariko used her brains and wisdom to fight her way in the world of men dominance. She wasn’t perfect, she made mistakes, but imperfect is what means to be human. Funny thing, though, is the more I read the more repetitive everything Mariko did became. It felt like she stuck in her character development at one point, and there was nothing to show any progress, only the author’s desperate attempt to justify Mariko by telling to us how smart and sly she is, how she outsmarted everyone, and how everyone was nodding in confirmation of Mariko’s genius, but 'tell, don’t show' is not the best way of moving your character development. Readers need facts to believe, and the book demonstrated the opposite of author’s words. For example, almost everything Mariko did when she got to the Black Clan (Rebels) was forgiven or oversight: Black Clan executed people for less than what Mariko was given a free pass for. And why? Because she’s a mysterious new recruit? Or because she’s so special? Special snowflake alert someone?! Or sometimes the logic behind her actions was so lame, you couldn’t understand how did this happen if even a child could’ve predicted the outcome Mariko couldn’t see He was smart, despite his age. Exceedingly watchful. A trait Mariko prized in herself.
Um, no Mariko, bragging about how genius you are is a way to becoming an egotistical schmoe.
Alas, I must admit that there was not enough depth to the main character to make me fully sympathize with and respect her. Secondary characters, though, they were more interesting than Mariko. Remember three mysterious book boyfriends I mentioned in my updates? Yes, Okami, Kenshin and Ranmaru are their names. Though they had less book space than Mariko did, I found myself following their stories with much more interest that I did with the heroine. I don’t want to reveal who was Mariko’s love interest, because it is kind of a surprise, but I'll mention Kenshin - Mariko’s brother. I was looking forward to siblings’ relationship, which is one of my favorite topics in books because I have a brother and can totally relate to conflicts between siblings. Alas, in this book there wasn’t enough ground to note something remarkable about Mariko and Kenshin’s relationship. They barely share one scene, and in the whole book, there was little mentioning of their ‘before’ relationship. Despite often sounding wise and telling the right thing, characters lacked some integral depth that would make them more endearing for a reader like me.
The other major problem I had with this book is the romance. I don’t know what it is about Renee Ahdieh’s writing, but the way she outlines the romantic relationship between the main characters is very cliché-like and oppressive. What I mean is she seems to always follow the same pattern in her books: from enemies to lovers, where characters start strong and independent, but the more time they spend in the near proximity to their romantic interest, the clingier they become. In this book, Mariko had a solid mission. Quoting: Follow orders. Engender trust. Strike when they least expect it. She repeated these words a million times, I swear, they became some kind of parrot words. But what she actually spent her time doing? Salivating over her romantic interest’s abs.
Her trail of thoughts: I hate him, but I want him; I was always so strong-willed, but I see his abs and to what places my will goes? The love interest brought out a wild, uncontrolled part of herself, Mariko had not even known existed before. Right, that sounds alarmingly familiar. And the same goes for the aforementioned love interest: he was always so controlled and the girl made him loose control he so much prided himself for. Oookay, if you say so, darling. *redirects to the gif above* I think the author rushed the romance too much, it would’ve been better if the romance was left on the stage of hints and slow-burn for the next book to develop more, because it seriously turned the whole story into one angsty drama with hasty love-for-life declarations that spoiled all the fun for me.
But, as it was with the romance in TWATD, I was rooting for secondary characters’ romantic developments in FITM as well. I don’t know why, but in both author’s previous books and in this one, forbidden romance between secondary characters feels more real and endearing to me. There wasn’t much of it, and the scenes we had were heartbreaking and sweet and ten times more intriguing than Mariko’s love drama.
One more thing I want to mention in my review is the ending. I am sorry to be such a Grinch, but, again, I wasn’t impressed with it, and the twist didn’t make me gasp, only if maybe in disappointment
Overall, Flame in the Mist is definitely a book worth reading if only for the Japanese setting and Eastern wisdom. But if you weren’t a fan of the author’s previous works, don’t expect to fall in love with this one, because it follows a lot of the same tropes TWATD had. And, on the contrary, if you were a fan, it is highly positive you will love this book as well. For me it was a 50/50 case, some things I liked a lot, some made me roll my eyes a lot. But I am definitely reading book 2 (by the way, is it a duology or trilogy?), and am looking forward to more book space for my new book boyfriends and secondary romances. Also, the plot was quite engaging, and a couple of questions that are left make me highly curious as for how things will work out in the sequel.
My finale verdict: recommended!
In contrast with her previous series (The Wrath and the Dawn) this book seems like more of the same.
A girl out for revenge. A guy out to find/rescue her. She falls in love-ish with the enemy. There's a potential love triangle. She says she's strong but really she's not. The magic is rather lame. The scenes are described in minutiae to the point it's bothersome, detracting from the plot.
Don't even get me started on the lame fight scenes, and then of course there's the dreaded cliffhanger. This is TWATD, deuxième partie.
That said, Ms Ahdieh certainly can write.
I will not be bandied about by men any longer. I am not a prize to be bought or sold.
Was is always necessary for boys to prove they knew more than anyone else around them?
She remembered Chiyo telling her that finding one’s match was like finding one’s other half. Mariko had never understood the notion. She was not a half. She was wholly her own.
Mariko nudged the handle of her spoon with a bound fingertip. “Are you ever angry you were born a woman?”
Yumi sat back on her heels and studied Mariko for a spell. “I’ve never been angry to have been born a woman. There have been times I’ve been angry at how the world treats us, but I see being a woman as a challenge I must fight. Like being born under a stormy sky. Some people are lucky enough to be born on a bright summer’s day. Maybe we were born under clouds. No wind. No rain. Just a mountain of clouds we must climb each morning so that we may see the sun.”
“You are first and foremost a person. A reckless, foolish person, but a person nonetheless. If I ever say you are not permitted to do something, rest assured that the last reason I would ever say so would be because you are a girl.”